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Open Eyes -(Nov. Challenge)
 
**Inspired by the poem, The Wailing Song, by Wiltshire**

e-piph-a-ny () n. pl. <-nies>....
4. a literary work or section of a work
presenting such a moment of revelation
and insight.
(Random House Webster)
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I must have been a bag lady in my former life
except the Good Book says you only have one,
who am I to argue.

I dumped the large suitcases earlier this year
burned them in the backyard firepit of my mind,
charred leather.

Kept a backpack to travel this new journey with
light and efficient, makes a good pillow to rest
my weary head.

It is that time of year again when the lights can
seem too bright and laughter echoes fingernails
on a chalkboard.

My eyes saw a different light today and my heart
was bathed in a gift given only in small increments,
acceptance.

I'll have a soft pillow for my head tonight the
backpack being lighter from that small treasure,
rest in peace, I will.

© 2005 Susan Britton

  ©
*Selected Haiku's for a Haiku Challenge,at Blueline Poetry, September/2005(a new Genre for me)*
 
 *1st ever attempt at haiku*

anxiously looking-
though there's something out of place
while looking serene
 © SB/2005
 
 
 shimmering rainbow-
colors the ripples of thoughts
gathering in mind
 © SB/2005
 
 Thirsting soldiers march
toward an oasis-
sand dunes shimmer blue
 © SB/2005
 
 
 Yellow ribbons tied
on trees and picket fences-
hope flies in the wind
 © SB/2005
 
 Broad weeping willow
filters raindrops through leaves-
a fairy's shower

 © SB/2005
 
 dreams of you melt
into fluid motions-
i turn, you are there

 © SB/2005
 
feathered creases
surround twinkling brown eyes
and ageless smile
 
 © SB/2005 
 
soft firelight
illuminates the room-
a babe nurses
 ©SB/2005

 On Tasting Snowflakes (Snow Crystals Challenge)
 
 My head turned in slow motion
taking in the sight of my first
snowfall. Incredibly white, like
a curtain of downy feathers
drifting down to earth.

I wanted to run out and play;
I wanted to jump for joy, I felt
free. I was 19 years old and
working, I waited and watched;
increasingly excited.

As we closed the day, the flakes
still fell softly to the ground.
I stood still in awe, then stuck
my tongue out to taste one or
two, maybe three.

Cold, cold, and cold again. There
was no taste, I discovered. Like
drinking water. So I closed my
eyes and tasted again...Heaven's
water, fresh and pure.
 © 2/14/05 sqb 

 Galactic Invasion (Snow Crystals Challenge)
 
 It looked like an alien lifeform laying there on the bench.
I didn't know what it was, but it didn't look good. I saw another fall and settle to the left; and then another to my right. My heart started to beat faster as I thought, what in the world is this?
Some form of Star Wars; maybe biological warfare I thought. We were being invaded, I was sure of it! I took a hearty gulp from my flask, peach brandy to warm me, and warn me. I looked around for someone to tell, but saw I was alone, facing this threat.
They continued to fall all around me, settling on my hat, my coat, my gloves. I became still and stared at the bench. They were mounting the forces as I swallowed another gulp of brandy. I became brave with the internal warmth. I bent over to have a better look.
In disbelief my jaw fell open, as my eyes told me what my brain would not.
Snow was falling from the sky. Freeform spatial dendrites they were, collecting in mounds to attack. I turned and sat on them, and drained my flask.
 © 2/11/05 sqb 

 Gin (One Word Challenge)
 
gin and tonic was my drink
when i turned twenty-one.
drank a whole bottle of
tangaray that night and
saw shrimp crawl up the wall.
 © 1/23/05 sqb

 Mop (One Word Challenge)
 
 as i grabbed the mop
to wipe the bile once
more from the floor,
i wondered why i
married you at all.

what did i see in you.

i wrung out the mop
and placed it oustside
the back door and saw
a feather falling-
me.
 © 1/22/05 sqb 

 Seldom ( One Word Challenge)
 
 i seldom see you anymore,
you remain a ghost in my
thoughts.
we don't visit like we used
to. i miss you.
are you still my friend?
 © 1/16/05 sqb 

New Post Worth ( One Word Challenge)
 
 
i am worth everything
i am worth nothing
who measures my worth if i am not worthy?
i measure me.
i am worthy to be considered your worth.
i am everything
i am
 © 2005/sqb  

New Post Fade (One Word Challenge)
 
memories of you fade against time
tears fall freely yet will fade away
always the heartbeat continues of
a love that lives on
  © 1/10/2005 sqb 

 Footage (One Word Challenge)
 
 the footage was vintage
from days gone by.
tin it looked like, proud faces
of pioneer women making it
westward.
photos of footprints in the dust.
1/06/05

 The Gift (Magnetic Poetry Challenge)
 
**...never having even heard of magnetic poetry before...this really stumped me...but at last..an attempt...**


Pleasure delivered with tiny fingers
touches my soul. Miracle of our love,
I treasure this gift given by you.

Soft bundle of joy, innocent eyes
cry pretty tears. Death cannot hold
your joy from us. I believe in forever.

The blessing of arms, elbows, knees and toes.
Feeling beautiful, a mouth smiles. Heart's wings
gloriously fly; a measure of happiness and love.
Having life then, I can only try.
 © 11/15/04 sqb

Poem created using Shadow Poetry Magnetic Word Tiles

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